If you write from the point of view of several different characters, it can liven up the whole story. It can also make it confusing, and readers will give up, because they can’t keep track of it all.
This post has some tips to keep you out of trouble.
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I am a freelance editor and proofreader, working with a wide range of clients from large companies to individuals. I can help you to communicate clearly by carrying out a final check, or by suggesting ideas get your message over. I am an Advanced Professional Member of the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading. I also have a sideline in textiles, as The Rainbow Angel.